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I am a skilled, outgoing, and adaptable philosophy student who has relevant skills in the field. My ultimate goal behind my philosophical education is to make significant contributions to my community through effective humanitarian services management. I believe that a conducive learning environment will foster problem-solving and critical thinking. I have interacted and taught students as an assistant lecturer at the college and university levels for four years. Through my teaching, I have compelled students to understand the facts from books and lectures and critically analyze them. To attain this, I have presented my lectures using interactive teaching aids and experiential learning opportunities. For instance, I have taught logic 101, Civic, and Ethical education modules. In the final project, I always ask students to come up with solutions to the problems that the society faces that are ethically acceptable. Besides, I track the students’ participation in learning when judging the final project.

Further, to meet the students’ expectations, I have always been requesting feedback about the quizzes and assignments they undertake and my presentation styles. As a result, I strive to meet their needs and effectively communicate their expectations. I plan and organize well to ensure my classes are a safe place for students to share feelings and demonstrate their ability. As an educator, I motivate students to value their skills and think creatively to come up with new innovative solutions through research. I also encourage time management and teamwork, all of which are relevant in becoming better, more creative, and innovative students by sharing ideas. I seek to help them develop a reading culture, develop effective strategies, and realize that reading can be fun. In all my endeavors in the classroom, I aim to become a better teacher and be the best role model for my students. 

After exploring the “Animal Farm” by George Orwell and “Guns Germs and Steel” by Jared Diamond, I have come across specific political and philosophical themes. As such, I realized ideology and beliefs have implications on power. Thus, I found myself with a desire to explore more on the field of philosophy. Specifically, my curiosity has been towards political ideology. As a result, it has driven me to seek information wherever I can find it, such as participating in political debate forums. I have developed a broader scope of knowledge and experience in political and ideology institutions through my interaction and appreciating diversity.

Consequently, upon acquiring my Bachelor of Arts degree in philosophy (minor: sociology) from Addis Ababa University, my focus began to widen. As such, I realized the correlation between political theory and philosophy. Besides, sociology has helped me understand various problems within the philosophy discipline that corresponds to human behavior. As a result, I can apply sociological theories with a philosophy to have a broader perspective on power and freedom. I always strive to support my knowledge of political ideologies through philosophical explanations.

Within philosophy, I specifically intend to study Machiavelli’s conception of political power in relation to those of the Greeks. As a father of the contemporary political thought of realism in “The Prince,” Machiavelli has significantly influenced modern civilization. Moreover, I want to explore the political principles that he upheld and analyze some of his opinions and phrases: “It is better to be widely feared than to be greatly loved.” To Machiavelli, power is the most significant aspect of politics, which calls for balance. 

Further, in my undergraduate level, I have enjoyed studying sociology. Besides, I have a Bachelor of Applied Science degree in Allied Health (respiratory care) from Seattle Central College. As such, I have been interested in examining the human condition. As a result, it has sparked a critical thought in my mind. Additionally, the works of Machiavelli and Freud have triggered my pursuit of matters regarding the human condition. Correspondingly, I have been able to understand the connection between social and philosophical theory. Despite my college and university life experience, I have desired to explore more in political philosophy. In studying philosophy, I will examine the facets of human nature and its position in the political discourse. Additionally, I will strengthen my ideas of politicians and philosophers, which I believe is vital in understanding how the world works.  

Upon completing the program, it will help me attain advanced positions such as civil service administrator and consultant. Similarly, I will be flexible to work in various industries, such as law firms and government entities. I believe my past has shown rapid progression in the philosophical world. Thus, enrolling for the MA in Philosophy will escalate the progress.

I look forward to finding my next challenge in the field of philosophy to make me a better philosopher and an innovative individual. Thank you for your time and consideration.

My ultimate goal behind my philosophical education is to contribute to my community through effective leadership of lasting socio-political changes and humanitarian services. As a socio-political and human rights activist from one of the most authoritarian regimes of the African continent, Ethiopia, I have personally experienced the challenges, risks, and success, though briefly, of advocating for socio-political reforms. I have been jailed and exiled for fighting for the respect of human dignity and rights. As you may know, there was a continuous popular resistance in Ethiopia’s Oromia region between 2014 and 2018, culminating in regime change in April 2018. I have participated in the popular resistance through various Media outlets and later by establishing my own media organization to raise awareness about democratic values and advocate political reforms. Our collective effort has forced the then Prime Minister of Ethiopia, Haile Mariam Desalegn, to resign. The leadership change was followed by continued political reforms, including the release of political prisoners and exiled politicians and activists’ return. After six years of exile and personally shared people’s feelings of happiness and relief, I also returned to Ethiopia due to the seemingly fall of the authoritarian regime that lasted for 27 years. However, political reform did not continue as promised. The dictatorial regime back in place, and Ethiopia is once again passing through civil war, communal conflict, hunger, and so on. I want to contribute to the lasting political and social change in Ethiopia and elsewhere in the world. I want to reflect on social and political problems deeply. I want to study social and political changes and great thinkers who conceptualize and theorize socio-political changes. I firmly believe that studying philosophy in general and social and political philosophy at the graduate level will help me contribute more in advancing socio-political changes. I believe that a conducive learning environment will foster problem-solving and critical thinking. Before my exile, I have interacted and taught students as an assistant lecture both at the college and university level for over five years. Through my teaching, I have compelled students not only to understand the facts from book and lectures but also critically analyze the information. To attain this, I have presented my lectures using interactive teaching aids and experiential learning opportunities. For instance, I have taught logic 101 and Civic and Ethical education modules. In the final project, I always ask students to come up with solutions to the problems that the society faces that are ethically acceptable. Besides, I track the student’s participation in learning when judging the final project.

 Further, to meet the students’ expectations, I have always been requesting feedback about the quizzes and assignments they undertake and my presentation styles. As a result, I strive to meet their needs and effectively communicate their expectations. I plan and organize well to ensure my classes are a safe place for students to share feelings and demonstrate their ability. As an educator, I motivate students to value their ability and think creatively to come up with new innovative solutions through research.

After exploring the “Animal Farm” by George Orwell and “Guns Germs and Steel” by Jared Diamond, I have come across specific political and philosophical themes. As such, I realized ideology and beliefs have implications on power. On top of my practical experience of the relationship between power and belief, the inspiration arose from the reading increase  a desire to explore more on the field of philosophy. Specifically, my curiosity has been towards political ideology. As a result, it has driven me to seek information wherever I can find it, such as participating in political debate forums. Through my interaction and appreciating diversity, I have developed a broader scope of knowledge and experience on both political and ideology institutions. Consequently, upon acquiring my Bachelor of Arts degree in philosophy (minor: sociology) from Addis Ababa university, my focus began to widen. As such, I realized the correlation between political theory and philosophy. Besides, sociology has aided me to understand various problems within the philosophy discipline that corresponds to human behavior. As a result, I am capable of applying sociological theories with philosophy to have a broader perspective on power and freedom. I always strive to support my knowledge of political ideologies through philosophical explanations.

Within political philosophy, I specifically intend to study on Machiavelli’s conception of political power in relation to those of the Greeks. Machiavelli as a father of the contemporary political thought, he has significantly influenced modern civilization. Moreover, I want to explore the political principles that were upheld by him and analyze some of his opinions and phrases such as “it is better to be widely feared than to be greatly loved”.

Further, in my undergraduate level, I have enjoyed studying sociology. Besides, I have a Bachelor of Applied Science degree in Allied Health (respiratory care) from Seattle Central College. As such, I have been interested in examining the human condition. As a result, it has sparked a critical thought in my mind. Additionally, the works of Machiavelli and Freud have triggered my pursuit of matters regarding the human condition. Correspondingly, I have been able to understand the connection between social and philosophical theory. Despite my experience in college and university life, I have desired to explore more in the field of political psychology. In studying philosophy, I will explore the facets of human nature and its position in the political discourse. Additionally, I will strengthen my ideas of politicians and philosophers, which I believe is vital in understanding how the world works.  

Upon completion of the program it will help me attain advanced positions such as civil service administrator and consultant. Similarly, I will be flexible to work on various industries such as law firms and government entities. I believe my past has shown rapid progression in the philosophical world. Thus, enrolling for the MBA in Philosophy will escalate the progress. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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