i am uploading the outline and the draft

my teacher left comments on the draft please fix them and use the outline to help fix the essay all the evidence on the outline i need you to include them in the essay.
she then said “Integrate evidence to support all the strong reasoning–each of your points has to have the supporting evidenceI tried to note where that would go, but let me know if you have any questions. Use a nice balance of both quotes and paraphrases as you integrate that evidence.”
please integrate the evidence i will include a site to help 

https://www.teachertube.com/videos/parenthetical-citation-and-signal-phrase-409668
https://www.easybib.com/guides/citation-guides/mla-format/in-text-citations/#why

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