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I would like somebody to dit my document in order to achieve the advanced levels on the rubric, the rubric is really straightfoward and self explanatory. I have answered these questions in order to make my essay:
What can you see in this picture?
What do you think has happened?
Why is the fallen soldier painted in pale shades of colour?
Why are there poppies growing?
What do you think the poppies represent? Could they represent more than one thing?
Discuss the contrast between the barbed wire and the poppies.
What is remembrance?
Why is important to remember events from the past?
Why do we hold a silence to remember events? What if we dont remember anything of the event (if we werent alive at the time)? What should you think about during a minute/two minute silence?
Why do people wear poppies?
What can we learn from the events of World War One? What can we apply to our own lives today?
The teacher’s comment:
– What is “it” in the beginning of your first paragraph? Remember to introduce your topic.
– Use the present tense when presenting/analyzing your evidence.
– It would have been better to connect the ideas between paragraphs. This reads as separate answers to questions with almost no connection between them.
Please don’t take this order if you don’t guarantee the advanced levels. I am low on marks and I need a good mark on this assignment for a good cost..
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