My suggestion is to provide even more details, really take the traveler there. You’ve included the most famous attractions, but perhaps you have some local insider’s tips to recommend as well?
The assignment is to write an article as an insider about the place where you live or grew up, and to give them the insider’s tour so that after 36 Hours, they really have a better understanding of the city/borough and its people. Next to each destination you should put the time, and the day as well. Take a look at the second attachment, as an example of this format for Brooklyn.
I’ll attach the example he gave below. And Also my essay that needs to be edited.
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