- Does the introduction paragraph provide an effective lead-in for the essay? On a scale of one to five, give the introduction a rating, with one being very dry and five being fascinating.
- Is the thesis the last sentence of the introduction?
- Is each paragraph fully developed? Make a note of one place where additional information is needed to help support the writers ideas.
- Are any paragraphs too long (resulting in reader confusion)? Are any paragraphs too short (resulting in a choppy essay)? Explain your response.
- Does each body paragraph contain a clear, focused topic sentence?
- Does the writer avoid the use of you statements?
- Does the conclusion bring the essay to a satisfying close? On a scale of one to five, give the conclusion a rating, with one being very dry and five being fascinating. Explain your response.
- What do you feel are the two major strengths of this draft?
- What are a couple of things the writer could strengthen as he/she revises?
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