1. Does the introduction paragraph provide an effective lead-in for the essay? On a scale of one to five, give the introduction a rating, with one being very dry and five being fascinating.
  2. Is the thesis the last sentence of the introduction?
  3. Is each paragraph fully developed? Make a note of one place where additional information is needed to help support the writers ideas.
  4. Are any paragraphs too long (resulting in reader confusion)? Are any paragraphs too short (resulting in a choppy essay)? Explain your response.
  5. Does each body paragraph contain a clear, focused topic sentence?
  6. Does the writer avoid the use of you statements?
  7. Does the conclusion bring the essay to a satisfying close? On a scale of one to five, give the conclusion a rating, with one being very dry and five being fascinating. Explain your response.
  8. What do you feel are the two major strengths of this draft?
  9. What are a couple of things the writer could strengthen as he/she revises?

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