Need someone to make me a introduction

i need someone to read my poems i will attached the docucent then give me 4 paragraph page this is an example please use this but put it in your own words dont forget to read my poems just need someone to make me the similar from this one 

Dear Dr. Kennedy-Nolle,

Attached please find my portfolio, Too Late for the Ghost Tour. I include 10 poems. My arc is loosely chronological as some of the poems are from my childhood experience, the center clusters around my parents divorce, and the end poems look to this Covid year.  

In all of these, I really made it a priority to make clear my content. I tried to flush out settings and characters using small examples of precise detail. Nearly all my poems seem to have the most emotionally significant to say about loneliness and solitude, especially when family breaks down- my major theme. I revised one, Body of Water Body of Glass: into a dramatic monologue form to capture my parents arguing.

 I tried in about of these to have the poems reach for a discovery. I seemed to be able to do that once I recognized where I was just repeating myself and writing past an endingthis was especially true on my sonnet and on my POV/object poems which explore the breakup of a marriage and my parents divorce. Here, too, I really worked hard to cut out sentimental language and melodrama. I discovered that most of my overwriting centered around melodrama. Once I saw that, I could cut lines without feeling like I was losing something.

On devices: I made a point to concentrate on my line breaks, especially in Still Life with Departure. I know we discussed how I tend to break lines at weak points; so I went back and carefully checked this, particularly trying to find opportunities as WC Williams does, to make my breaks fall on words that have a dual meaning as a noun and as an adjective. I think my best example is the line, I slide down the backside/of my life and there was a road/kill waiting for me.

I also spent a fair amount of time on reworking my imagery, A big focus for me was working on writing precise descriptions, especially as a means to provide narrative detail. For example, in my poem about my grandfathers dementia, I tried to make clear just what the illness was and how it revealed itself in little details like his forgetting I was his granddaughter or his thinking home was actually a Broadway stage. I tried, using cesuras and white space, to capture his broken speech and trailing thought. 

I struggled the most working on sound; of all the devices, these cause the most difficulty for me as I just dont seem to hear rhythm so much so I included only one sonnet because I had such a hard time with the iambic pentameter counting. Sound devices are weak and mostly unrevised. I much prefer irony and imagery If there is another limitation here its that I use too few devices.

Thank you for all your help this term.

Best,

Corinne

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i will message you the poems thank you it wont let me attached